Thursday, 23 February 2012

Men Shopping



Today’s story-poem last appeared on the blog in 2010; it was inspired (like many of my poems) by a tale related by a couple with whom I got chatting quite by chance in a pub once, and never saw again. I'f often head for the same bar after a particularly frustrating day at work.  So, no, it isn’t autobiographical, but I chose to write it in the first person not only for a sense of immediacy but also because - like many readers if feedback is anything to go by - I could easily relate to the events described if not (quite) the happy ending.

Who says shopping is boring?

MEN SHOPPING

He was reaching for coffee
on a supermarket shelf;
The graceful swing of his body
cut me to the quick;
One eye refused to blink, kept
at the task in hand;
Trying hard not to think about
his finger nudging mine;
A tenuous grasp on the jar,
began to slip;
My hand was left no choice,
obliged to help;
He thanked me with a grin,
I smiled back;
When he started to move on,
I panicked;
“So you like decaf?” I blurted
to a shirt button;
A hint of hairy chest heaved,
breath slow and warm;
“I do indeed,” he grinned again,
made my cheeks burn...
and I came up with something
even more banal;
We chatted away the whole
length of the aisle;
Finally, at preserves, a parting
of the ways;
Finished off the shopping
in a heady daze;
Outside, he was unloading into
an old banger;
He waved, had me blushing
from ear to ear;
The same grin, infuriating me
this time;
Lips parted, tip of a pink tongue
teasing my prime;
My mouth went dry. I barely
recall that lift home

Years on, though, I still thrill
to waking up next to him

[From: The Third Eye by R. N. Taber, Assembly Books, 2004]

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